a_non_ah_mouse

This is a quick, off-tangent try at getting Hiyuu right.
Pretty good? Pretty shitty?
Accurate to character? (Biggest concern!)

Either way go check out the song near the end because it will make you so happy you'll poop rainbows!

( 'A Whimsical Afternoon' )

Because I've always wanted a nice looking journal... ;)

One for the money-
(Chorus of AWWWWW!!!)


Two for the Show-

kicking ass and taking hearts


Three to Get Ready-



And one for the Record to Show!


(Note the drawn application of gravity!!!!!)

This is the new Ch2 and it is entirely different from the old one (mostly because it's faster!)
Three major concerns, in order, are-
1. Getting Tatsuma right!
2. No spelling or Grammar mistakes.
3. Making Kyouichi as michevious as possible while still being likable.

Let me know how I did and I will edit accordingly!

General Question for Ch. 3- How many and what types of sex have Tats and Kyo respectively had previous to meeting?


( Clicky here for Ch2! )

Someone says something encouraging and I can't help myself! I loves writing and I LOVES kudos, hence kudos for writing is simply too much to ignore.

For those that I owe some for of explanation (M-cat and Sela) my excuse is three part-

1. My Grandma freaking died, and after six months of "She won't make it through the night!" Followed the next morning by "She pulled through and is feeling fifty times better!" Always the back and forth until the night it actually happened I kept having dreams of my Mom calling and saying how she made it in the end. It was really creepy and crushing when I woke up.
PLUS she was an amazing christian woman who talked to me about The Jesus before she past and I couldn't, in good conscious, get started on one of these ventures when the dirt hadn't even settled. Honestly, I still sort of fell weird about it... *bites nails*
Does anyone feel me on that?

2. WHY IS COLLEGE SO HARD? They make you read books and write papers and take tests and get into groups with lazy people (Like me!) and they give you VERY few grades and they never care how much work all your other classes have piled on, and heaven forbid you have to go out of state for a funeral and miss four days of classes no one's there to pat you on the back and give you time for make up work... except my New College professor, who is sweet and consoling and GOD I adore her. But the rest of them can vanish into a cloud of mustard gas!

3... Yeah, I lied there was only two explanations.

Enough of that. A short but raunchy part two coming up at 3 AM! Followed by little response because my boo is back in town and I don't want him seeing my glorious shame!

Check out Chapter One, version 2.0!
The kiss at the end is MUCH better (rawr!) and there's a discovery made about my favorite mysterious martial artist.
Ideas for Ch2 will be prized and used; I promise!


( 'Novel Direction' [Part 1] )

Because I've got some free time, and all the grammar issues were getting to me.
Also to correct my Tatsuma/Hiyuu idiocy *stubborn, stubborn*.

But really, because I want to write something I actually like. Also, to get the story moving in a longer direction since the anime isn't, haha *tear*.

Anyway, to my adored readers- Always feel free to peruse and give suggestions!

Yours in perfect sincerity,
A-non-ah-mouse



P.S. Anyone know where the last six or so episodes of TMKG season 2 in English are? I've been looking for *looks at clock, adds on fingers* a year and a half now.
They would be helpful.
Hell, I'll even buy it.

P.P.S. If you do see any grammar missteps, misspellings, awkward conversation, poor action description, or any *dramatic pause*...OOC  (also known as Tatsuma-personality muck-ups) than feel my thanks for letting me know. But please say it nicely. *crosses arms and nods*

*hears snickering*

  It's true! He's hard to write about!

He's "mysterious"....